Friday, November 5, 2010

Influenced children by video games

* Introduction- I have two children and they play a lot of time video games. Not only my children, their friends love to play video games, too.

* Supporting sentences-

   1.Emotional, behavior problem: angry, upset easily, short atention, wild acting
   2. Social problem- childen who play video games for long time are hard that is making social with friends.
   3.Can't stop problem-children can't stop playing video games. they are poisoned by video games.

* conclusion- We should think carefully about video games have bad infuluence on our children.
                      we have to find best solution be enjoyable,educational video game and  plan,help for playing only in settled time.
                    

1 comment:

  1. Good outline, Minsook. I'll look forward to seeing it develop. See you in class!

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