* Introduction- I have two children and they play a lot of time video games. Not only my children, their friends love to play video games, too.
* Supporting sentences-
1.Emotional, behavior problem: angry, upset easily, short atention, wild acting
2. Social problem- childen who play video games for long time are hard that is making social with friends.
3.Can't stop problem-children can't stop playing video games. they are poisoned by video games.
* conclusion- We should think carefully about video games have bad infuluence on our children.
we have to find best solution be enjoyable,educational video game and plan,help for playing only in settled time.
Good outline, Minsook. I'll look forward to seeing it develop. See you in class!
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